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Liason
03-07-2010, 11:31 AM
The rules are simple. Post a haiku using the traditional 5-7-5 syllabic layout. The last line of your haiku shall be the first line for the next poster's.

I'll go first,

Biological
Their processes continue
If only to die

ehares
03-11-2010, 04:59 AM
If only to die
though reason elusory
Once more to the breach

BuShinJu
03-11-2010, 06:44 PM
Once more to the Breach
Happiness on the outside
No more inner walls

freeeekyyy
03-11-2010, 06:48 PM
I like wasting my day
It makes me feel good inside
I do not know why

ehares
03-12-2010, 04:52 AM
I do not know why
You failed to mirror the line
Their last is your first

reb
03-12-2010, 07:53 AM
their last is your first?
the women i poked; each time,
i was a virgin.

ehares
03-12-2010, 11:11 AM
I was a virgin
Purity mine; none lost to
that damn flower thief

freeeekyyy
03-12-2010, 11:19 AM
That damn flower thief
He lost his chance to be big
Why must he die now?

ehares
03-12-2010, 11:29 AM
Why must he die now?
Our world left unfinished
A tale left untold

rewhu
03-12-2010, 12:34 PM
A tale left untold
no babies in all those years?
A three hour tour

Latro
03-12-2010, 12:36 PM
A three hour tour
of chasms dreary and dim
the night sleeps away

Liason
03-12-2010, 04:06 PM
The night sleeps away
Farther and farther it goes
beyond the world's grasp

reb
03-12-2010, 04:19 PM
beyond the world's grasp
lie many things-the dreams of
poor fools and great kings.

Liason
03-12-2010, 04:24 PM
poor fools and great kings
men of fortune and men sold
lives that fate carries

ehares
03-12-2010, 04:30 PM
lives that fate carries
but scrap and ore to the forge
once one; one again

Liason
03-12-2010, 04:31 PM
once one; one again
another trend is yet set
of endless process

ehares
03-12-2010, 04:43 PM
of endless process
await, by the gavel's fall,
injustice for all

Liason
03-12-2010, 04:46 PM
Injustice for all
Might for only the true kings
Inconsistencies

BuShinJu
03-14-2010, 03:46 AM
Inconsistancies
Absolutes traded for lies
Tell me the whole truth

reb
03-14-2010, 09:21 AM
tell me the whole truth.
leave nothing out. i have time.
no, not that much time.

WoodsWoman
03-14-2010, 11:49 AM
No, not that much time
Has passed since that fateful day
When my world ended.

ehares
03-14-2010, 12:38 PM
When my world ended.
Toppled by a word's stroke
Catch me, I'm falling

WoodsWoman
03-14-2010, 12:56 PM
Catch me I'm falling
Tears and memories flood in
Yet tomorrow calls.

ehares
03-14-2010, 01:50 PM
Yet tomorrow calls
Though certainty and grace fail
answer with a roar

WoodsWoman
03-14-2010, 05:27 PM
Answer with a roar
Then a silence will descend
Whisper sweet nothings.

reb
03-14-2010, 07:10 PM
whisper sweet nothings,
they buoy the soul. airy drops
make dreams of light thought.

WoodsWoman
03-14-2010, 07:14 PM
make dreams of light thought
tomorrow comes whispering
is it all for naught?

reb
03-14-2010, 07:31 PM
is it all for naught?
the question begs no answer.
firstly, what is it?

WoodsWoman
03-14-2010, 07:39 PM
firstly, what is it?
that bright dream of tomorrow
promising new life.

BuShinJu
03-14-2010, 11:34 PM
promising new life
scientology rip off
aliens my a$$

reb
03-15-2010, 05:30 AM
aliens my a$$
they shaved it. dorsally nude.
great embarrassment.

Liason
03-15-2010, 04:36 PM
Great embarrassment
It was said to the mad crowd
Harboring sadly

reb
03-15-2010, 06:36 PM
harboring sadly,
she furled her sails, adrift on
waves of tomorrow.

OwenF
03-15-2010, 07:20 PM
waves of tomorrow
should have broken yesterday
back when I could surf

BuShinJu
03-15-2010, 09:37 PM
Back when I could surf
Waves would crash on top of me
Blue crabs dart away

OwenF
03-16-2010, 06:26 AM
blue crabs dart away
scuttering across the sand
like my fleeting dreams

reb
03-16-2010, 07:49 AM
like my fleeting dreams
surfing left me like a bad
lover-hear the Ventures.

OwenF
03-16-2010, 12:15 PM
lover, hear the ventures,
the feathers of arctic terns
whistling pole to pole

WoodsWoman
03-16-2010, 03:05 PM
whistling pole to pole
the arctic winds stir my soul
I will become whole

OwenF
03-16-2010, 04:40 PM
I will become whole
a stone wall vanquished by ice
remade in the spring

BuShinJu
03-16-2010, 07:27 PM
Remade in the Spring
Winter's works are not over
The World keeps turning

WoodsWoman
03-16-2010, 07:28 PM
the world keeps turning
whether I will it or not
hang on for the ride.

OwenF
03-17-2010, 06:40 AM
Hang on for the ride,
child. Carousel horses aren’t
as safe as they look.

Liason
03-17-2010, 12:35 PM
As safe as they look
But they never truly are
The world's existence

OwenF
03-17-2010, 03:23 PM
the world’s existence
in a flood of red poppies
it drowns the whole hill

reb
03-18-2010, 05:59 AM
it drowns the whole hill
the ants scurry for high ground.
one ant meditates.

OwenF
03-18-2010, 08:58 AM
one ant meditates
along the chemical trail
to Chuang Tzu’s picnic

reb
03-19-2010, 08:47 PM
to Chuang Tzu's picnic
the uncles, aunts, the cousins
all come with good food.

BuShinJu
03-20-2010, 03:42 AM
All come with good food
hampers are packed to the brim
blankets spread on twigs

idem
03-20-2010, 10:33 AM
Blankets spread on twigs
Is the only bed I have
My shield against dark

WoodsWoman
03-20-2010, 05:21 PM
my shield against dark
doesn't stop my brains wanderings
in dim dark places

rwm4768
03-20-2010, 05:50 PM
in dim dark places
I find myself far too much
and I want to hide

WoodsWoman
03-20-2010, 06:04 PM
and I want to hide
not to face these challenges
tossed at me by life

rwm4768
03-20-2010, 06:12 PM
tossed at me by life
the waves with their crests and troughs
wash me out to sea

idem
03-20-2010, 07:51 PM
wash me out to sea
gather me in feather wings
and rock me till dawn

rwm4768
03-20-2010, 07:56 PM
and rock me till dawn
till I sing your cherished song
and fall fast asleep

Liason
03-21-2010, 09:14 AM
And fall fast asleep
The forest does in winter
Plants alike creatures

OwenF
03-21-2010, 03:29 PM
Plants alike, creatures
alike. Old stones. The same things
in a buried world.

WoodsWoman
03-21-2010, 05:08 PM
in a buried wold
memories haunt all places
tears and laughter mix

BuShinJu
03-21-2010, 09:25 PM
Tears and laughter mix
Melange of experience
It is all the same

reb
03-22-2010, 06:56 AM
it is all the same
apart from the parts that are
different each day.

BuShinJu
03-22-2010, 06:04 PM
Different each day
Say, what do it do nephew?
Daily improvement

WoodsWoman
03-22-2010, 06:12 PM
Daily improvement
Dreams of massive magnitude
Rarely come to pass

reb
03-22-2010, 07:32 PM
Rarely come to pass
though small gems of life glint in
every corner.

OwenF
03-22-2010, 07:47 PM
every corner
of Kepler’s divine ellipse:
a potential trap

WoodsWoman
03-23-2010, 06:30 AM
a potential trap
this defeated-ness that comes
a-creeping around

know the enemy
resist and it shall flee from you
persistence pays off

reb
03-23-2010, 06:43 AM
persistence pays off
the quality of legend,
the compass to path.

WoodsWoman
03-23-2010, 01:25 PM
the compass to path
imperial compass rose
guide to the future

OwenF
03-23-2010, 03:30 PM
guide to the future
with a plastic planchette, sold
by Parker Brothers

reb
03-23-2010, 06:04 PM
by Parker Brothers
is a lake. deep, cold, windswept.
toss bad pens in it.

BuShinJu
03-23-2010, 10:56 PM
Toss bad pens in it
Then receive bright gems from it
Equality laws

OwenF
03-24-2010, 06:26 AM
equality laws
buttress the architecture
of the rippling pond

WoodsWoman
03-24-2010, 08:14 AM
of the rippling pond
bring to mind interactions
all are connected

OwenF
03-24-2010, 02:38 PM
all are connected
indubitably, the roads
run from aught to ought

reb
03-24-2010, 03:13 PM
run from aught to ought
then back again. breathe. once more.
run from ought to aught.

BuShinJu
03-24-2010, 07:34 PM
Run from ought to aught
Thinking that I thought a thought
Mind over matter

WoodsWoman
03-25-2010, 04:26 AM
mind over matter
mental machinations mount
method to madness

OwenF
03-25-2010, 09:59 AM
Method to madness:
"Will you walk out of the air,
my lord?" Yes, I will!

reb
03-25-2010, 07:08 PM
my lord, yes i will
ignore these quotation marks
lest i not proceed.

BuShinJu
03-26-2010, 05:48 AM
Lest I not proceed
The freer free to be me
I, you, me and we

OwenF
03-26-2010, 01:22 PM
I you me and we
squat round the fire to tell the
tales that make us us

WoodsWoman
03-26-2010, 05:16 PM
tales that make us us
the narratives of our lives
before and after

OwenF
03-26-2010, 07:50 PM
before and after
the flood the spectrum shined true
promising riddles

BuShinJu
03-27-2010, 05:02 AM
Promising riddles
Delivering paradox
Sphinx answers question

OwenF
03-27-2010, 06:08 AM
sphinx answers question
eats her interlocutor
smokes a good cigar

reb
03-27-2010, 09:07 AM
smokes a good cigar
sips sherry. bulldog knows mans'
love from sky will come.

OwenF
03-27-2010, 03:56 PM
love from sky will come
or will not come, the grain bends
in the big bad wind

BuShinJu
03-28-2010, 06:33 PM
In the big bad wind
The wolf fills up both his cheeks
Demolish straw house

OwenF
03-29-2010, 05:45 AM
demolish straw house
and burn straw man down—wolves don’t
care much for logic

WoodsWoman
03-29-2010, 07:42 AM
care much for logic?
the heart doesn't follow rules,
it is it's own guide.

OwenF
03-29-2010, 04:19 PM
It is its own guide,
Beatrice and Dante.
Look, the mystic rose!

reb
03-30-2010, 09:38 AM
look, the mystic rose!
a petal torn asunder,
beauty still intact.

WoodsWoman
03-30-2010, 05:11 PM
beauty still intact
last years rose, shattered glory
single petals now

OwenF
03-30-2010, 08:47 PM
single petals now
falling in the stream, kissing
their own reflections

WoodsWoman
03-31-2010, 12:51 PM
their own reflections
tossed and swirled in life's eddies
identity lost

OwenF
03-31-2010, 04:42 PM
identity lost
and found, worn items jumbled,
gathering this dust

WoodsWoman
03-31-2010, 05:24 PM
gathering this dust
hidden layers of meaning
each one speaks of home

BuShinJu
03-31-2010, 09:23 PM
Each one speaks of home
Bees dance clockwise and counter
Royal jelly beans

mozi84
03-31-2010, 10:51 PM
Royal jelly beans
Dancing in the penny jar
My guess: three hundred

OwenF
04-01-2010, 04:07 AM
my guess: three hundred
Spartans would be enough to
raise serious hell

WoodsWoman
04-01-2010, 06:02 PM
raise serious hell
would be way too much effort
at this point in time

mozi84
04-01-2010, 10:31 PM
At this point in time
I should go and get some sleep
But just one more drink

BuShinJu
04-02-2010, 02:37 AM
But just one more drink
From the waters of forget
Perhaps tomorrow

WoodsWoman
04-02-2010, 05:42 AM
Perhaps tomorrow
Actually will arrive
Believe in someday

OwenF
04-02-2010, 11:54 AM
believe in someday
in actualization
of the sun’s promise

mozi84
04-03-2010, 07:15 PM
of the sun's promise
staring at me won't blind you
let the rays shine bright

BuShinJu
04-04-2010, 04:41 AM
Let the rays shine bright
On all dreams for tomorrow
Illumination

reb
04-04-2010, 08:38 AM
illumination
prestidigitation and
determination

WoodsWoman
04-04-2010, 05:09 PM
determination
can carry one just so far
but friends help also

reb
04-04-2010, 05:15 PM
but friends help also
though sea goes to horizon;
the wind carries all.

WoodsWoman
04-04-2010, 05:27 PM
the wind carries all
hearts and hopes and destruction
wherever it wills

OwenF
04-04-2010, 10:41 PM
wherever it wills
the sword will fall, not sparing
kings, fools, or lawyers

BuShinJu
04-05-2010, 06:42 AM
Kings, fools and lawyers
Death comes for each one of them
Each tastes life's sweetness

OwenF
04-06-2010, 06:25 AM
each tastes life's sweetness,
stirring it in with care, for
the tea is bitter

WoodsWoman
04-06-2010, 06:35 AM
the tea is bitter
that I swallowed yesterday
it doesn't set well

kazzamunga
04-06-2010, 11:07 AM
it doesn't set well
when vain worries overwhelm
best to let them drift

WoodsWoman
04-06-2010, 12:20 PM
best to let them drift?
hidden alligators swim
ready to consume

kazzamunga
04-06-2010, 12:33 PM
ready to consume
fear itself waits in darkness
even fear fears itself.

BuShinJu
04-06-2010, 09:00 PM
Even fear fears itself
Travel through stranger eons
Even Death may die

OwenF
04-06-2010, 10:02 PM
even death may die,
its pride undone by strains of
thoughts that fail to fade

AcerbusMare
04-07-2010, 12:01 AM
Thoughts that fail to fade
Create an abyss of night
Listen to the rocks

kazzamunga
04-07-2010, 03:37 AM
Listen to the rocks
With their silent noise they pierce
Flesh, wood, arrogance

WoodsWoman
04-07-2010, 08:36 AM
flesh, wood, arrogance
can suddenly invade space
that had once been safe

hutbug
04-07-2010, 03:32 PM
that had once been safe
was now revealed as fire
and burnt the heart so near

OwenF
04-07-2010, 04:44 PM
burnt the heart so near
it was carbon-hard, and yet
still quite rare inside

WoodsWoman
04-07-2010, 04:59 PM
still quite rare inside
not entirely consumed
self salvageable

Seriously
04-07-2010, 06:52 PM
un-salvageable
tatty little ragdoll girl
sadly torn in two

mozi84
04-07-2010, 10:17 PM
sadly torn in two
when long-time friends are no more
which side should i choose?

Rudy
04-08-2010, 05:34 AM
Which side should I choose
In this unending battle
Between my two halves.

reb
04-08-2010, 06:19 AM
between my two halves
stands my true self-unbroken,
whirling tornado.

Rudy
04-08-2010, 06:21 AM
Whirling tornado
Nature's unstoppable agent
Enacting vengeance

OwenF
04-08-2010, 09:24 AM
enacting vengeance
against time and lost baubles
I kiss your wan face

Rudy
04-08-2010, 10:08 AM
I kiss your wan face
Illness taking you from me
This may be the last

OwenF
04-08-2010, 10:14 AM
this may be the last
of the light in the mead hall
out the window now



[Hat tip to the Venerable Bede.]

Rudy
04-08-2010, 10:21 AM
Out the window now
The cat leaps to its freedom
Stolen gains in hand

rewhu
04-08-2010, 10:24 AM
Stolen gains in hand
kids stream out of Hot Topic
five finger discount

OwenF
04-08-2010, 10:26 AM
stolen gains in hand
I exit the bank and smile
now the getaway

---------- Post added 04-08-2010 at 12:27 PM ----------

Sorry. Axe mine! Next haiku should begin with "five finger discount."

Rudy
04-08-2010, 10:28 AM
Five finger discount:
For moral degradation,
A cavalier name

reb
04-08-2010, 03:57 PM
A cavalier name
-a facade-some cannot tell
horse from an oxen.

OwenF
04-08-2010, 07:34 PM
horse from an oxen
farm still had plenty of oats,
so why the long face?

reb
04-09-2010, 07:22 AM
so why the long face?
trying the short face somehow
obstructed my nose.

hutbug
04-09-2010, 07:28 AM
Obstructed my nose
ah, cursed event
in the garden of roses

Seriously
04-09-2010, 07:42 AM
in the garden of roses
a single sunflower blooms
lonely among friends

Rudy
04-09-2010, 08:22 AM
Lonely among friends
Adrift without his presence
She staves off despair

OwenF
04-09-2010, 10:55 AM
she staves off despair
with written music, thinking
pianissimo

hutbug
04-09-2010, 03:02 PM
Pianissimo-generated melodies
wafted in the air
soaring and swooping

WoodsWoman
04-09-2010, 07:06 PM
soaring and swooping
I feel my wings expanding
consuming the air

OwenF
04-09-2010, 07:34 PM
consuming the air,
a firestorm, burning bright, yet
she sits in silence

Rudy
04-09-2010, 10:17 PM
she sits in silence
internal cacophony
hidden from the world

hutbug
04-09-2010, 10:41 PM
hidden from the world
the babbling brook did sing
but no one listened

mozi84
04-10-2010, 02:20 AM
but no one listened
four minutes, thirty three ticks
music to my ears

WoodsWoman
04-10-2010, 04:38 AM
but no one listened
when difficulties surfaced
so she wrote instead

---oops - synchropost, next person gets to choose.

Rudy
04-10-2010, 07:21 AM
But no one listened,
The cries of the innocent,
Selfishly ignored.

Oops! Wrong page

Music to my ears
The sound of children laughing
Joy's propagation

OwenF
04-10-2010, 08:07 AM
Joy's propagation
made her incredibly tired
so she wrote instead

reb
04-10-2010, 08:26 AM
so she wrote instead
of talking. words, the sound...a
stupid distraction.

WoodsWoman
04-10-2010, 12:31 PM
stupid distraction
a phone call at the wrong time
ends in confusion

mozi84
04-10-2010, 07:00 PM
ends in confusion
long heartfelt conversation
started so sincere

WoodsWoman
04-10-2010, 07:10 PM
started so sincere
and continued just the same
until death parted

temi
04-11-2010, 07:10 AM
until death parted
those were the words he promised
and then he killed her

mozi84
04-11-2010, 12:48 PM
and then he killed her
ever so softly that night
in bed with his song

hutbug
04-11-2010, 07:38 PM
in bed with his song
stretching and squeezing lightly
the light fantastic

WoodsWoman
04-11-2010, 07:46 PM
the light fantastic
of the dancing spring sunlight
tripping through the trees

hutbug
04-11-2010, 08:17 PM
Tripping through the trees
moondust stippled pine needles
floating seeds adrift

OwenF
04-12-2010, 07:38 AM
floating seeds adrift
on the jagged gray water
hopelessly happy

Seriously
04-12-2010, 07:41 AM
hopelessly happy
gaily innocent moment
watch the bubble burst

WoodsWoman
04-12-2010, 07:47 AM
watch the bubble burst
against the green blade of grass
providing water

OwenF
04-12-2010, 08:02 AM
providing water
balancing an earthen jug
keeping my back straight

Seriously
04-12-2010, 08:06 AM
keeping my back straight
pain shoots down aching muscle
heavenly massage

hutbug
04-12-2010, 12:23 PM
heavenly massage
a thing unobtainable
except in one's dreams

Distance
04-12-2010, 12:39 PM
Except in one's dreams
Fantasy shouldn't hold sway
Life's not so easy

Seriously
04-12-2010, 12:45 PM
Life's not so easy
said the tortoise to the hare
Shell happens, my friend

kazzamunga
04-12-2010, 02:37 PM
Shell happens, my friend
Just when you're looking for sand
Shard instead of grain

WoodsWoman
04-12-2010, 04:18 PM
shard instead of grain
cutting unexpectedly
waterfall of pain

temi
04-12-2010, 07:10 PM
waterfall of pain
intense roaring through my head
yet shimmers beauty

OwenF
04-12-2010, 09:08 PM
yet shimmers beauty,
the old lean-to, come morning,
at first and at last

mozi84
04-12-2010, 10:57 PM
at first and at last
the rain dries up in the hills
with life left barren

kazzamunga
04-12-2010, 11:07 PM
with life left barren
withering landscapes hold fast:
anticipation.

OwenF
04-13-2010, 05:42 AM
anticipation
of her pale footsteps: lucid,
intoxicated

WoodsWoman
04-13-2010, 06:34 AM
intoxicated?
exhaustion erodes the day
only sleep will help

Seriously
04-13-2010, 06:59 AM
only sleep will help
dull the harem scarem thoughts
make the voices stop

SelfMadeBum
04-13-2010, 07:00 AM
My very first one
will it suck or find glory?
only time will tell

WoodsWoman
04-13-2010, 07:05 AM
only time will tell
if survival will be mine
a tenacious tree

or will it become
as the petrified forest
there but not alive

kazzamunga
04-13-2010, 07:07 AM
only sleep will help
feather-light fingers softly
brush away the day

oh bit behind the times!

SelfMadeBum
04-13-2010, 07:11 AM
Oop. There I go not reading the rules again. :embarassed:

brush away the day
let it fall, like ashes, dead
and let live again

kazzamunga
04-13-2010, 07:11 AM
there but not alive
the burning of the fire dies:
urban renewal

---------- Post added 04-13-2010 at 03:12 PM ----------

haha damn the time delay!

SelfMadeBum
04-13-2010, 07:15 AM
damn the time delay
robber, thief, charlatan, whore
no more light for you

kazzamunga
04-13-2010, 07:29 AM
no more light for you
than there is dark on the sun
infinite blackness

SelfMadeBum
04-13-2010, 07:32 AM
infinite blackness
encloses, enfolds... close
drip drip drip drip drip

hutbug
04-13-2010, 07:37 AM
drip drip drip drip drip
why didn't he fix it yet
impatience descends

kazzamunga
04-13-2010, 07:43 AM
drip drip drip drip drip
insipid stream of nonsense
inane chit-chat...scat.

OwenF
04-13-2010, 09:17 AM
inane chitchat . . . scat
stylings of Mel Torme . . . and
impatience descends

kazzamunga
04-13-2010, 10:03 AM
impatience descends
calm facade of suppressed ire
now a tornado

OwenF
04-13-2010, 07:42 PM
now a tornado
plus all these crazy meth heads
must leave trailer park

temi
04-13-2010, 08:08 PM
must leave trailer park
mani, pedi, big hair night
wolf is on the prowl

mozi84
04-13-2010, 10:42 PM
wolf is on the prowl
with gin and tonic in hand
cougars, be wary

kazzamunga
04-14-2010, 01:09 AM
cougars, be wary
meth turns beast into beauty
rose-tinted goggles

khadi
04-14-2010, 01:30 AM
rose-tinted goggles
scratch between hot asphalt and
heavy heeled boot

kazzamunga
04-14-2010, 02:01 AM
heavy heeled boot
delicate tree branch wavers
topiary fail

OwenF
04-14-2010, 08:23 AM
topiary fail,
said Charlie Chan, to conceal
killer behind bush

kazzamunga
04-14-2010, 04:06 PM
killer behind Bush
Democrat assassin with
American Dream

WoodsWoman
04-14-2010, 06:07 PM
American Dream
must it be pie in the sky?
or is this Eden?

OwenF
04-14-2010, 08:06 PM
Or is this Eden,
Barbara? I would have sworn
that it was Hershey.

hutbug
04-14-2010, 08:37 PM
Barbara was their
name, but showbiz was their game
magic in the air

OwenF
04-14-2010, 09:09 PM
magic in the air
each time I inflate my lungs
to take it all in

mozi84
04-15-2010, 01:04 AM
to take it all in
my weary soul wants no more
suffering, begone

kazzamunga
04-15-2010, 01:21 AM
suffering, begone
crescendo of pain leads to
soft, gentle, nothing

Nikita
04-15-2010, 02:38 AM
soft, gentle, nothing
the words spoken in the night
self-degredation

kazzamunga
04-15-2010, 03:03 AM
self-degradation
beauty and simplicity
marred by the macabre

Nikita
04-15-2010, 03:13 AM
marred by the macabre
her incestual exploits
are intensified

kazzamunga
04-15-2010, 03:54 AM
'R' intensified
exotic roll of the tongue
rarifies riddle

Nikita
04-15-2010, 03:58 AM
rarifies riddle
the kaleidoscopic mind
reality paused

kazzamunga
04-15-2010, 06:04 AM
reality paused
in the wake of a daydream
her heart grows lighter

OwenF
04-15-2010, 03:18 PM
her heart grows lighter
when she finds her lost ice skates
safe in the tree house

Distance
04-15-2010, 03:24 PM
Safe in the treehouse
Sushi with champagne on ice
Served cold in the heat

kazzamunga
04-15-2010, 03:47 PM
served cold in the heat,
dish warranted complaint from
hard-line connoisseur

Distance
04-15-2010, 03:51 PM
Hard-line connoisseur
Believes heated sake trumps
Should try different things

kazzamunga
04-15-2010, 04:00 PM
should try different things
as the actor said to the
bishop over tea

OwenF
04-15-2010, 05:20 PM
Bishop over tea,
but tea over pawn. Must make
a sane sacrifice.

Distance
04-15-2010, 05:34 PM
A sane sacrifice
Is a true oxymoron
There's no loss in gain.

WoodsWoman
04-15-2010, 06:46 PM
there is loss in gain
opportunities are gone
leaf on fortunes wind

OwenF
04-15-2010, 08:17 PM
leaf on fortune’s wind
describes a drunken helix
in the moon-mad gleam

Nikita
04-15-2010, 11:16 PM
in the moon-mad gleam
she raises her arms skyward
eternal embrace

mozi84
04-15-2010, 11:40 PM
eternal embrace
is something i have long sought
one-night stands grow old

kazzamunga
04-16-2010, 12:25 AM
one-night stands grow old
smooth skin and curves give way
to shallow self-pity

Nikita
04-16-2010, 12:36 AM
(that last line is 6 syllables)

shallow self-pity
the song of the forgotten
old lamentation

Distance
04-16-2010, 12:40 AM
Old lamentation
Does time heal all wounds and tears?
Not everything.

kazzamunga
04-16-2010, 12:43 AM
hehe yeah the to should have been in the line above

Nikita
04-16-2010, 12:44 AM
Not everything but...
What does nothing presuppose -
A void, or the end?

Distance
04-16-2010, 12:49 AM
A void, or the end?
Is too easy an answer
Life is a challenge.

Nikita
04-16-2010, 12:55 AM
Life is a challenge.
Worthy only of the strong.
Put up or shut up.

Distance
04-16-2010, 01:08 AM
Put up or shut up
Strong, abrupt and aggressive
Where is the laughter?

Nikita
04-16-2010, 01:10 AM
Where is the laughter?
When you look inside your heart
What is there to find?

Distance
04-16-2010, 01:13 AM
What is there to find?
Children playing and laughing
A rose with no thorns.

Nikita
04-16-2010, 01:15 AM
A rose with no thorns
Lacks natural defenses
Prey for the wicked.

Distance
04-16-2010, 01:18 AM
Prey for the wicked
Is a wonderful word play
Pray for the wicked.

Nikita
04-16-2010, 01:20 AM
Pray for the wicked,
For their annihilation
Before the kingdom.

Distance
04-16-2010, 01:29 AM
Before the kingdom
Peter guards the pearly gates
He's only one man...

Nikita
04-16-2010, 01:31 AM
He's only one man...
And he's hardly a woman
She is victory.

kazzamunga
04-16-2010, 01:37 AM
she is victory
personified, her conquests
swiftly forgotten

Distance
04-16-2010, 01:40 AM
She is victory
Never lead by vorpal blades
She bids you goodnight. ;)

Nikita
04-16-2010, 01:42 AM
She bids you goodnight,
But will return in the morn'
With a bodice torn.

kazzamunga
04-16-2010, 02:01 AM
with a bodice torn
in a moment of passion
the lady cries rape

Nikita
04-16-2010, 05:03 AM
The lady cries rape,
but was she such a lady?
Tales from the brothels...

kazzamunga
04-16-2010, 05:23 AM
tales from the brothels
are inappropriate in
present company

Nikita
04-16-2010, 05:33 AM
Present company
Excluded from the witch hunts
Fierce and low the growl

kazzamunga
04-16-2010, 05:45 AM
fierce and low the growl
of the engine...getaway
car, primed for purpose

Nikita
04-16-2010, 05:54 AM
Car, primed for purpose,
Body loaded in the trunk
The day's work is done.

kazzamunga
04-16-2010, 06:09 AM
the day's work is done
murderer's mind trades death for
ponies and glitter

Nikita
04-16-2010, 06:28 AM
Ponies and glitter
Heroin's new nom de plume
Kiddie crack abounds.

kazzamunga
04-16-2010, 07:52 AM
kiddie crack abounds;
dreary tower blocks suppress
innate ambition