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Seriously
07-16-2010, 08:51 AM
a nice Chianti
rolls across the tongue, delight
savor the finish

katrin
07-16-2010, 05:11 PM
savor the finish
months of pounding the pavement
your goal is in sight

MassHysteria
07-16-2010, 06:49 PM
Your goal is in sight
The sun is nearly up now
The worst is behind

WoodsWoman
07-16-2010, 07:49 PM
the worst is behind
the tomorrow worried about
before today came

katrin
07-18-2010, 05:19 AM
before today came
yesterday came, before that
i don't remember

maddhatter
07-18-2010, 06:26 AM
I don't remember
When is the last time I cried
Lying on the bed

kazzamunga
07-18-2010, 08:08 AM
lying on the bed
under white emulsion sky,
twist pile sea below

katrin
07-18-2010, 01:17 PM
twist pile sea below
floating on a daydream with
my dog at my side

kazzamunga
07-18-2010, 02:46 PM
my dog at my side
accordion on my knee
parrot on my head

katrin
07-18-2010, 04:06 PM
parrot on my head
I search through brilliant fabrics
must match these colors!

maddhatter
07-18-2010, 07:33 PM
must match these colors!
I won't allow blue with red
this is not easy

WoodsWoman
07-18-2010, 07:36 PM
must match these colors
rang throughout the meeting place
the old dame was mad


snaked...

this is not easy
keeping pace with a frantic
place full of people

katrin
07-18-2010, 07:41 PM
place full of people
I watch from behind my hair
why am I wary?

Seriously
07-18-2010, 10:18 PM
why am I wary?
lifetime of experience
jades a weary soul

WoodsWoman
07-19-2010, 06:13 AM
jades a weary soul
overburdened with worry
and seeking relief

maddhatter
07-19-2010, 06:20 AM
and seeking relief
from the pressure in my head
Can I go to sleep?

jmizell
07-19-2010, 06:34 AM
can I go to sleep?
I just opened up my eyes
Can I look around?

maddhatter
07-19-2010, 06:52 AM
Can I look around?
I promise I will be good
Just believe in me

jmizell
07-19-2010, 07:56 AM
Just believe in me
Trust me, what I say is truth
Ignore my fingers

Seriously
07-19-2010, 08:14 AM
Ignore my fingers
Running lightly down your spine
It doesn't tickle

kazzamunga
07-19-2010, 02:55 PM
it doesn't tickle
don't euphemise the trickle
of cells like sickles

katrin
07-19-2010, 04:23 PM
of cells like sickles
she knew not, nor did she care
she wanted to live

WoodsWoman
07-19-2010, 07:25 PM
she wanted to live
her own life not one designed
against her wishes

katrin
07-20-2010, 04:43 AM
against her wishes
she is sent to bid you to
come in to dinner

OwenF
07-20-2010, 07:43 AM
come in to dinner
said the spider to the fly
the food’s to die for

jmizell
07-20-2010, 10:34 AM
the food's to die for
don't choke on the wordless taste
don't forget to chew

kazzamunga
07-20-2010, 01:29 PM
don't forget to choo
you're a tank engine thomas,
it's just what we do

katrin
07-20-2010, 07:20 PM
it's just what we do
making money multiply
a pyramid scheme

kazzamunga
07-22-2010, 02:14 PM
a pyramid scheme
Imhotep's vision, first
of the phallic tombs

katrin
07-23-2010, 05:07 AM
aside to Kazza: tombs are phallic? Huh? :thinking:

of the phallic tombs
we must explore, discover
their inner secrets

WoodsWoman
07-23-2010, 12:14 PM
their inner secrets
will be revealed to man
the mystery gone

MassHysteria
07-23-2010, 12:56 PM
The mystery gone
He's no longer interesting
Just another dude

Metrocop
07-23-2010, 03:09 PM
Just another dude
Longing, dreaming of supper
Slap me with a steak

katrin
07-23-2010, 04:48 PM
Slap me with a steak
Here comes the steak back atcha
I like vegetables

WoodsWoman
07-23-2010, 07:23 PM
I like vegetables
but for me meat is better
and I enjoy it

katrin
07-24-2010, 09:23 AM
and I enjoy it
restless questing after truths
that sneak up on you

mozi84
07-24-2010, 11:48 AM
that sneak up on you
like an invisible touch
its presence you fear

WoodsWoman
07-24-2010, 06:40 PM
its presence you fear
if you think you've no control
and it can eat you

katrin
07-25-2010, 06:50 AM
and it can eat you
it's consuming your insides
your skin collapses

WoodsWoman
07-25-2010, 07:25 AM
your skin collapses
like removed with sandpaper
in shreds on the ground

kazzamunga
07-25-2010, 11:32 AM
in shreds on the ground
remnants of paper-thin dreams
clean up, start again

katrin
07-25-2010, 04:13 PM
clean up, start again
clean up, start again, and then
clean up, start again

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clean up, start again
break another glass mirror
seven years' bad luck

WoodsWoman
07-25-2010, 07:08 PM
seven years' bad luck
surely must be over now
for he died last year

kazzamunga
07-26-2010, 11:57 AM
for he died last year
wild winds howled in sympathy
with my tortured thoughts

Archaic Smile
07-26-2010, 12:36 PM
With my tortured thoughts
I lie in total darkness
Breathing in and out

Liason
07-26-2010, 03:29 PM
Breathing in and out
Letting everything its will
Going as it may

WoodsWoman
07-27-2010, 09:11 AM
going as it may
new developments arise
whether willed or no

Doppelbock
07-27-2010, 10:43 AM
whether willed or no
sh*t always seems to happen
so just deal with it

WoodsWoman
07-27-2010, 10:47 AM
so just deal with it
not quitting is the thing
learn to carry on

Archaic Smile
07-27-2010, 11:49 AM
Learn to carry on
Though the heart may be heavy
Time will ease the load

RedOrange823
07-27-2010, 11:51 AM
Time will ease the load
Truckers driving north to south
Off-loading burdens

Archaic Smile
07-27-2010, 01:49 PM
Off-loading burdens
Jesus is at the wheel of
The semi of life

Hee ;D

WoodsWoman
07-27-2010, 06:51 PM
time will ease the load
much there is still to be learned
easy distraction

---oops----

the semi of life
continues to roll onward
bringing new visions

RedOrange823
07-27-2010, 07:22 PM
bringing new visions
artist, musician, author
to open our eyes

katrin
07-28-2010, 08:31 AM
to open our eyes
this is a good idea
don't fall off the cliff!

Seriously
07-28-2010, 08:36 AM
don't fall off the cliff
into eternal nothing
keep me company, please

WoodsWoman
07-28-2010, 01:03 PM
keep me company please
on this road to the future
the best things are shared

RedOrange823
07-28-2010, 01:37 PM
the best things are shared
except ice cream and cheesecake
on second thought, no

maddhatter
07-30-2010, 03:18 AM
on second thought, no
I will pass on that cheesecake
Although I want it

RedOrange823
07-30-2010, 06:18 AM
Although I want it
Total world domination
Is not a good plan

MortalWombat
07-30-2010, 06:22 AM
Its not a good plan
to set free the caged monkeys
due to the havoc

RedOrange823
07-30-2010, 06:24 AM
due to the havoc
all major highways are closed
zombies on the loose

ClydeB
07-30-2010, 06:25 AM
I take comfort in
the fact that my life sucks less
than yours does loser

katrin
07-30-2010, 06:26 AM
zombies on the loose!
the apocalypse? really,
there's no difference

MortalWombat
07-30-2010, 06:27 AM
"Zombies on the loose!"
Better get a baseball bat
Take aim and swing hard

double snaked, really?
I'll fix it..

there's no difference
though I try to post quickly
the snakes still prevail.

:irked:

RedOrange823
07-30-2010, 06:28 AM
Take aim and swing hard
"Hey, batter, batter, batter"
7th inning stretch

MortalWombat
07-30-2010, 06:31 AM
7th inning stretch
the peanuts are gone
better hope it's not Casey

katrin
07-30-2010, 07:03 AM
he's playing a song
better hope it's not Casey
house cleaning music

Archaic Smile
07-30-2010, 10:53 AM
House cleaning music
Come dowsed in mud, soaked in bleach
Smells like Nirvana

katrin
07-30-2010, 11:05 AM
Smells like nirvana
Sensory deprivation
Living in this tank

MortalWombat
07-31-2010, 04:21 AM
Living in this tank
Swimming around in circles
The monotony

kazzamunga
07-31-2010, 10:03 AM
the monotony
spare me the frequency of
such cacophony

WoodsWoman
07-31-2010, 12:13 PM
such cacophony
of feelings, like wildflowers
rampant in my heart

katrin
07-31-2010, 02:57 PM
rampant in my heart
the hope, the optimism!
must stomp out the fire

MassHysteria
07-31-2010, 03:25 PM
Must stomp out the fire
The man isn't worth this hurt
Find someone better

Desmond Linus
07-31-2010, 03:38 PM
Find someone better
Someone who respects my soul
That's what I hope for

katrin
07-31-2010, 04:06 PM
find someone better
at putting up with your sh-t
Mr. Douche Baggins

MortalWombat
07-31-2010, 05:41 PM
Mr. Douche Baggins
Such an unfortunate name
Book by a cover?

WoodsWoman
08-01-2010, 06:12 AM
book by a cover?
while it just may be helpful
it never tells much

MortalWombat
08-01-2010, 08:34 AM
It never tells much
though, maybe it tells enough
to the listener

maddhatter
08-01-2010, 05:13 PM
to the listener
I want to announce something
The bear ran away

Minerva
08-01-2010, 05:17 PM
The bear ran away
The forest was polluted
And crying for help

Seriously
08-01-2010, 07:02 PM
And crying for help
The lost child wanders alone
Rejected again

WoodsWoman
08-01-2010, 08:18 PM
rejected again
the manuscript languishes
on the closet shelf

MortalWombat
08-02-2010, 05:17 AM
on the closet shelf
sits the child's precious toy
some punishment, huh?

OwenF
08-06-2010, 10:26 AM
Some punishment, huh?
But then a masochist won’t
like eating ice cream.

MortalWombat
08-06-2010, 10:28 AM
like eating ice cream
life's a drippy mess
why don't we all scream?

Seriously
08-06-2010, 10:36 AM
why don't we all scream
I'm lactose intolerant
make it soy next time

Archaic Smile
08-06-2010, 11:17 AM
Make it soy next time
The barista at Starbucks
Screwed up my latte

Desmond Linus
08-06-2010, 11:53 AM
Pineapple sushi
Disgusting and Revolting
I'm gonna vomit

MortalWombat
08-06-2010, 12:24 PM
I'm gonna vomit
Are you being serious?
a sickening twist

Liason
08-06-2010, 06:27 PM
A sickening twist
With each tumbling array
Navigate it slow

MortalWombat
08-06-2010, 06:30 PM
navigate it slow
dangerous curves and sharp turns
this perilous road

WoodsWoman
08-06-2010, 08:04 PM
this perilous road
to be walked along today
yet joy is waiting

Seriously
08-06-2010, 08:29 PM
yet joy is waiting
I see it in the distance
just beyond the tears

kazzamunga
08-07-2010, 08:37 AM
just beyond the tears
honourable amidst lies
fraudulent facade

katrin
08-07-2010, 11:02 AM
fraudulent facade
four shiny avatar walls
with nothing inside

WoodsWoman
08-07-2010, 06:47 PM
with nothing inside
what do I have to offer
to anyone else?

OwenF
08-08-2010, 06:45 AM
to anyone else
she was just a pretty face
to him, though, the world

kazzamunga
08-08-2010, 02:26 PM
to him, though, the world
was a prairie at sunset...
she saw tangled trees

MortalWombat
08-08-2010, 04:09 PM
she saw tangled trees
he saw a vast adventure
such is tarzan's life

katrin
08-08-2010, 06:07 PM
such is tarzan's life
endlessly swinging in trees
his feet stay so clean!

MortalWombat
08-08-2010, 06:09 PM
his feet stay so clean!
oh, the remarkable suds
so good at their job

kazzamunga
08-09-2010, 05:57 AM
so good at their job
mellifluous whirring wings
feed the heavy drone

Minerva
08-09-2010, 08:39 AM
Feed the heavy drone
Workers are also precious
But not like the Queen

Archaic Smile
08-09-2010, 11:13 AM
But not like the Queen
Proper in her countenance
The Red King nods off

MortalWombat
08-09-2010, 12:36 PM
The Red King nods off
Will McCarthy lead the way?
Does the scare lead on?

kazzamunga
08-09-2010, 03:56 PM
does the scare lead on
to anaphylactic shock?
tragic halloween

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tragic halloween
candle falls, pumpkin weeps wax
second degree burns

OwenF
08-11-2010, 05:09 PM
second degree burns,
but the third degree, that can
leave him in ashes

MortalWombat
08-11-2010, 07:41 PM
leave him in ashes
for dust's to dust, and all that
but never forget

kazzamunga
08-12-2010, 02:12 AM
but never forget
freewheeling poppy petals
form floating garlands

OwenF
08-12-2010, 05:40 AM
form floating garlands,
fair Ophelia, but take some
swimming lessons first

kazzamunga
08-12-2010, 08:54 AM
swimming lessons first
then ballet, tap and modern
middle class Monday

WoodsWoman
08-12-2010, 07:37 PM
middle class monday
beyond my experience
we all had to work

kazzamunga
08-13-2010, 12:26 AM
we all had to work
muscles melted, minds melted
birds howled and wolves sang

MortalWombat
08-13-2010, 06:34 AM
birds howled and wolves sang
the dances of life went on
pick up, keep going

WoodsWoman
08-13-2010, 06:35 PM
pick up, keep going
tomorrow will be coming
new thing will happen

maddhatter
08-13-2010, 06:41 PM
new thing will happen
happiness is in the air
music to my ears

MortalWombat
08-14-2010, 04:23 AM
music to my ears
the rhythm fits my movement
such is this charade

N0c7urn3
08-14-2010, 08:03 AM
such is this charade
actions making my brain flee
such banality

OwenF
08-14-2010, 09:06 AM
such banality
of irony and bleakness:
the stale avant-garde

N0c7urn3
08-15-2010, 02:13 AM
the stale avant-garde
paints but words silenced
seen by all yet heard by none

katrin
08-15-2010, 07:01 AM
seen by all yet heard by none
meteors raced through the night
so many wishes

MortalWombat
08-15-2010, 11:31 AM
So many wishes
Eyes to the sky, hopeful, yet
Just one shooting star

WoodsWoman
08-15-2010, 12:06 PM
just one shooting star
carries with it all my dreams
so very fragile

MortalWombat
08-15-2010, 12:10 PM
So very fragile
the tightrope balancing act
one slip breaks the trick

kazzamunga
08-15-2010, 03:39 PM
one slip breaks the trick
but more to the point at least
a couple of bones

MortalWombat
08-15-2010, 03:58 PM
a couple of bones
organs, skin, muscles and nerves
what else makes humans?

katrin
08-15-2010, 05:09 PM
what else makes humans?
thought, breath, grief, love, memories
synapses firing

MortalWombat
08-15-2010, 06:47 PM
Synapses firing
their messages rush forward
neuron to neuron

OwenF
08-15-2010, 08:31 PM
neuron to neuron,
the fireworks spread, romantic
semantic structure

Cam66
08-15-2010, 09:14 PM
semantic structure
puncture, what mind can know well
or dare to tell all

OwenF
08-16-2010, 05:50 AM
Or dare to tell all?
Should I explain what’s missing
in the cookie jar?

N0c7urn3
08-16-2010, 06:13 AM
in the cookie jar?
treats and such await taking
sweet sweet sugar rush

OwenF
08-16-2010, 06:18 AM
sweet sweet sugar rush
at the bakery, let’s hope
no one gets trampled

MortalWombat
08-16-2010, 01:31 PM
no one gets trampled
we hold the children up high
the crowd crushes on

Archaic Smile
08-16-2010, 02:19 PM
The crowd crushes on
Gaining momentum in its
Mob mentality

MortalWombat
08-16-2010, 03:27 PM
Mob mentality
normally I wouldn't, but..
Every one else is

WoodsWoman
08-16-2010, 07:55 PM
Every one else is
Continuing their lives as
Though nothing happened

kazzamunga
08-17-2010, 02:48 AM
though nothing happened
there was no lack of matter;
not really nothing

OwenF
08-17-2010, 05:45 AM
not really nothing
but no thing was in the chest
the future filled it

MortalWombat
08-17-2010, 05:57 AM
the future filled it
they stood tall and looked on to
their hopes, dreams, and goals

N0c7urn3
08-17-2010, 09:58 AM
their hopes, dreams, and goals
laid beaten, bloodied and crushed
I can only laugh

Liason
08-17-2010, 03:50 PM
I can only laugh
With wanton abandonment
To be so amused

OwenF
08-17-2010, 03:50 PM
I can only laugh
when I’m firing a pistol
it’s hard to make friends


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OOPS!


---------- So "to be so amused" gets used.--------------


to be so amused
that I weep like a schoolgirl
that’s the life for me

N0c7urn3
08-17-2010, 04:45 PM
that's the life for me
the brain is my ecstasy
my world, mine to see

WoodsWoman
08-17-2010, 06:05 PM
my world, mine to see
and share with friends if I can
things that I enjoy

N0c7urn3
08-18-2010, 08:02 AM
things that I enjoy
Money, fame and power? No.
knowledge and silence

WoodsWoman
08-18-2010, 09:33 AM
knowledge and silence
all it takes is for good men
to allow evil

Liason
08-18-2010, 02:42 PM
To allow evil
Sayeth and is said by all
Endure it fully

N0c7urn3
08-18-2010, 05:20 PM
Endure it fully
reward lies ahead, or not!
No heaven for you.

MortalWombat
08-18-2010, 05:46 PM
No heaven for you
except not 'heaven', but 'soup'
the TV nazi

N0c7urn3
08-18-2010, 07:10 PM
the TV nazi
controls all our minds, save one
the one they call 'V'

OwenF
08-20-2010, 05:03 AM
the one they call V
is the object of Stencil (To view links or images in this forum your post count must be 15 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.)
as weirdness goes on

N0c7urn3
08-20-2010, 05:31 AM
as weirdness goes on
one clings to that one constant
the eternal void

Archaic Smile
08-20-2010, 09:07 AM
The eternal void
Lost in the contemplation
What is nothingness?

WoodsWoman
08-20-2010, 09:23 AM
what is nothingness
but a heart amputation
that you must survive

MortalWombat
08-20-2010, 09:27 AM
that you must survive
things to do, places to see
stick around a while

rwyatt365
08-20-2010, 10:27 AM
stick around a while
excitement galore awaits
no time to be shy

WoodsWoman
08-20-2010, 10:30 AM
no time to be shy?
will others have patience if
they see i'm trying?

OwenF
08-21-2010, 06:37 AM
they see I’m trying,
do the flowers, but they have
their own mute struggles

N0c7urn3
08-22-2010, 01:18 AM
their own mute struggles
for forever, ever takes
silence is golden?

OwenF
08-22-2010, 07:50 AM
silence is golden
in the afternoon, and when
my thoughts must be weighed

N0c7urn3
08-22-2010, 09:22 AM
my thoughts must be weighed
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am I a robot?

tarabelle
08-23-2010, 12:37 AM
am I a robot
programmable by the world
to overtake you?

N0c7urn3
08-23-2010, 04:06 AM
to overtake you?
i would need to rush myself
i would rather not

OwenF
08-23-2010, 04:59 AM
I would rather not
eat thumbtacks and gasoline
please rethink the plan

kazzamunga
08-23-2010, 05:21 AM
please rethink the plan
turned thirty and unmarried
try not to panic!

katrin
08-23-2010, 05:36 AM
try not to panic!
it's a red ant invasion
quick! grab the pepper!

kazzamunga
08-23-2010, 05:51 AM
quick, grab the pepper
and salt; add some flavour while
she's in the kitchen

jmizell
08-23-2010, 06:16 AM
she's in the kitchen
putting together something
the smell is too much

N0c7urn3
08-23-2010, 07:15 AM
the smell is too much
cacophonous sensations
just leave me alone!

jmizell
08-23-2010, 07:19 AM
just leave me alone
to wallow in self-loathing
darkness leads to light

MortalWombat
08-23-2010, 07:39 AM
darkness leads to light
the sun is somewhere shining
and all that jazz, right?

jmizell
08-23-2010, 11:17 AM
and all that jazz, right?
that's how it's supposed to be?
tell them I said no

N0c7urn3
08-23-2010, 07:10 PM
tell them I said no
no drones mingle around me
tell them to buzz off

tarabelle
08-23-2010, 11:25 PM
tell them to buzz off
I will not take calls today
alone in my thoughts

WoodsWoman
08-24-2010, 09:19 AM
alone in my thoughts
I found a place of beauty
to visit often

jmizell
08-25-2010, 08:44 AM
to visit often
my own small sanctuary
in my own small mind

OwenF
08-28-2010, 07:30 AM
in my own small mind
the universe is contained
vastness isn’t so

N0c7urn3
08-28-2010, 07:32 AM
vastness isn’t so
infinity is nothing
my mind is still blank

kazzamunga
08-30-2010, 02:22 PM
my mind is still blank
fish bowl turned to bell jar, thoughts
suspended, so bleak

WoodsWoman
08-30-2010, 02:24 PM
suspended, so bleak
yet holding seeds of promise
and sunrise breaking

kazzamunga
08-30-2010, 03:05 PM
and sunrise breaking
paints inky leaves shades of gold
blue-sky alchemy

WoodsWoman
09-02-2010, 08:21 AM
blue-sky alchemy
render colors to my day
rainbow hews and gray

N0c7urn3
09-02-2010, 08:41 AM
rainbow hews and gray
perceptions all out of whack
damn panic attacks

Liason
09-02-2010, 11:48 AM
Damn panic attacks
And all that they bring with them
Forever shocking

WoodsWoman
09-02-2010, 05:54 PM
forever shocking
those electric pulses fly
through the cattle fence

MortalWombat
09-04-2010, 06:51 AM
through the cattle fence
the dogs fly after their sport
continuous 'tag'

katrin
09-04-2010, 04:09 PM
continuous tag
our town wears your graffiti
it matches your tats

kazzamunga
09-05-2010, 02:26 PM
it matches your tats,
your new (and old) sweetheart's name
who says love's skin deep?

OwenF
09-07-2010, 11:11 AM
who says love’s skin deep?
even lust is deeper, is
soaked in sweet mindstuff

Taste of peat
09-07-2010, 11:46 AM
soaked in sweet mindstuff
my rage blends with happiness
in a poison bed

Seriously
09-07-2010, 06:32 PM
in a poison bed
built from remnants of our love
may you die slowly

Taste of peat
09-08-2010, 04:19 PM
may you die slowly
the eyes stuck in empty space
holding tight with pride

OwenF
09-08-2010, 07:41 PM
holding tight, with pride,
to my inflatable duck,
I frighten the sharks

Taste of peat
09-10-2010, 02:48 AM
I frighten the sharks
They can eat thousand fishes
To go far away

jmizell
09-10-2010, 07:34 AM
to go far away
leaving behind, all that is
death to those who wait

OwenF
09-11-2010, 06:51 AM
death to those who wait
on orders and paperwork
when the town's on fire

WoodsWoman
09-11-2010, 05:41 PM
when the town's on fire
everyone shows up to help
small community

OwenF
09-13-2010, 02:43 PM
small community
on an endless plane: find the
point of origin

Taste of peat
09-13-2010, 03:58 PM
point of origin
a DNA we still make
as walking onwards

OwenF
09-14-2010, 01:50 PM
as walking onwards
proved difficult, I opted
to cartwheel backwards

Taste of peat
09-14-2010, 03:34 PM
to cartwheel backwards
I'll just sit and have a coke
while watching the sky

WoodsWoman
09-14-2010, 08:00 PM
while watching the sky
it turned red and yellow hues
as the sun went down

kazzamunga
09-15-2010, 04:39 AM
as the sun went down
it started to sound like night
when silence echoes

WoodsWoman
09-15-2010, 04:54 PM
when silence echoes
sometimes it holds whispers of
old love and laughter

this silence cuts twice
first by the absence of love
then by memory

maddhatter
09-15-2010, 06:41 PM
then by memory
I draw a picture of you
and put in my heart

WoodsWoman
09-15-2010, 06:51 PM
and put in my heart
for the wicked ax to fall
heart amputation

OwenF
09-16-2010, 04:07 PM
Heart amputation?
A heart’s a choice. Love with
velvet and sawdust (To view links or images in this forum your post count must be 15 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.).

paperclip
09-16-2010, 04:25 PM
velvet and sawdust
though I thought I heard a thump
prefab breaks often

OwenF
09-16-2010, 05:07 PM
prefab breaks often
but is fun to assemble,
hello, Legoland

kazzamunga
09-17-2010, 02:54 AM
hello, Legoland
build me a fairytale, a
pixelated dream

WoodsWoman
09-17-2010, 11:44 AM
pixelated dream
of people both near and far
who I long to meet

kazzamunga
09-17-2010, 02:03 PM
who I long to meet
charming little person with
all our best features

OwenF
09-17-2010, 03:58 PM
all our best features
are earthen pigments, painted
with a fine-tip brush

Taste of peat
09-17-2010, 05:03 PM
with a fine-tip brush
I will clean the cutest nails
they are simply yours

KillJohnConnor
09-17-2010, 05:03 PM
with a fine-tip brush
our autobiographies
are penned in the dark

WoodsWoman
09-17-2010, 06:07 PM
are penned in the dark
will not hold deepest longings
pain beyond bearing

maddhatter
09-17-2010, 06:52 PM
pain beyond bearing
I cried of my suffering
my eyes are closing

Taste of peat
09-18-2010, 07:35 AM
my eyes are closing
they stand for wet and mean dreams
before I wake up

WoodsWoman
09-19-2010, 05:08 AM
before I wake up?
am I really still sleeping?
it's only a dream?

Taste of peat
09-19-2010, 04:58 PM
It's only a dream
Flying saucers with green men
Eating laser beans

OwenF
09-20-2010, 06:50 PM
eating laser beams
will be all the rage soon—come
the revolution

WoodsWoman
09-21-2010, 07:23 AM
the revolution
that my heart is going through
shows me someone new

Deliberator
09-27-2010, 04:29 PM
shows me someone new
as he trips down the hallway
shouting like a fool

alt lit
09-27-2010, 09:21 PM
shouting like a fool,
heretic chokes on his wish
bone-headed demise

OwenF
09-28-2010, 05:41 PM
bone-headed demise,
Yorick? this flagon’s poured, then,
for infinite jest

alt lit
09-28-2010, 05:53 PM
for infinite jest
Yorick read Foster Wallace,
laughed himself to death

OwenF
09-29-2010, 04:57 PM
laughed himself to death
over endnotes, tennis, and
some curious gloom

Taste of peat
09-29-2010, 05:00 PM
Some curious gloom
Spreads around me like a fog
I try to touch it

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Some curious gloom
Spreads around me like a fog
I try to touch it

WoodsWoman
09-29-2010, 06:52 PM
I try to touch it
make it something on it's own
this feeling unknown

maddhatter
09-29-2010, 07:09 PM
this feeling unknown
I don't know what to do now
Can you please tell me?

Minerva
09-30-2010, 05:09 AM
Can you please help me?
Or will you just pass on by?
No caring, no heart?

jmizell
09-30-2010, 02:23 PM
no caring, no heart?
an empty space where once was
alone in your shell

OwenF
09-30-2010, 03:52 PM
alone in your shell,
dreaming tortoise, you race past
Achilles again

alt lit
10-01-2010, 03:09 PM
Achilles again
miscalculates Zeno’s mind,
resilient riddles

Taste of peat
10-01-2010, 03:12 PM
resilient riddles
Some place I could make for them
I cannot control

WoodsWoman
10-01-2010, 06:26 PM
I cannot control
what tomorrow may contain
only this moment

Taste of peat
10-01-2010, 06:29 PM
Only this moment
Contains proper existence
Past lays in shadows

WoodsWoman
10-01-2010, 07:31 PM
past lays in shadows
hiding the things that would trip
the unwary thought

alt lit
10-02-2010, 05:00 PM
the unwary thought
pushes you past breakers, where
blue becomes calm black

Lenavis
10-02-2010, 08:50 PM
blue becomes calm black
under your yellow lamplight
I barely notice

Arcanist
10-02-2010, 09:41 PM
i barely notice
as life streams silently by
am I even alive?

alt lit
10-03-2010, 05:36 PM
am i even alive?
all dreams fall like leaves into
past long ago lived

Taste of peat
10-03-2010, 05:41 PM
Past long ago lived
And it is gonna come back
Here in the future

WoodsWoman
10-04-2010, 08:39 AM
here in the future
amazing things have happened
new life blossoming

OwenF
10-05-2010, 05:51 AM
new life blossoming
spiraling up the trellis
still rooted to earth

WoodsWoman
10-05-2010, 10:39 AM
still rooted to earth
uncertain winds pull at me
I must keep walking

OwenF
10-05-2010, 05:35 PM
I must keeping walking,
said the postman, despite the
dogs and lightning bolts