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Stratego
05-21-2009, 12:25 AM
Shakespearean Sonnets, anyone?

structure:
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B

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GG

10 syllables each line, iambic pentameter (or roughly so)

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For time, fleet as an arrow, swift and true
doth fly to the heart of eternity;
and like the blade which cuts the mortal wound,
do the days, and hours, unwavering...



(This might be a little hard, but I'd like to try it.)

Dolores
05-27-2009, 11:36 AM
All things must pass and time is a-flying
A tale of woe. Alas, how sad a fate!
Short is my life, and my love is dying
My life is withered; my laments too late

idem
05-27-2009, 02:08 PM
The arrow dark with soot draws near to me
I shield you gently from approaching fear
And as the blackened water meets the sea
Our pain entwines within a silver tear.

Stratego
05-27-2009, 02:20 PM
but love, immune to the least whim of time
will endure, beyond this song and this rhyme.

(not too bad...perhaps I'll get better with practice? Thanks guys, for trying. Anyone game to try again?)

idem
05-27-2009, 02:41 PM
Sure, I'll start.

The thunderstorm with bleeding clouds, they say
Is like a fight between the gods on high
Or like the monster barely kept at bay
But all I notice when I search the sky....

Dolores
05-28-2009, 01:38 AM
Is thy bright face. Ashamed, I close my eyes
Where are those days of happiness and light?
Thy love I lost due to a web of lies
The storm is raging; it is forev'r night

SongofSeptember
05-28-2009, 03:13 AM
An endless show'r of lightning strikes the ground,
As if to pine for words I failed to speak
Aloud. I wish I knew to find the sound
That reassures to me I am not weak.

idem
05-28-2009, 02:46 PM
But silence only greets my desperate prayer
For thunderstorms leave wretched silent air.

Dolores
06-03-2009, 06:17 AM
All things must pass and time is a-flying
Thy sweet face’s but my saddened mind’s display
Night’s upon my soul; my heart is crying
Too late, alas, I failed to seize the day